This is my first short story. I finished (“gave up on”, better said) the editing July 9, 2018. It’s not going to win any Pulitzer but I don’t think it’s terrible. The dialogue needs more work and the transitions between time periods are a bit abrupt and confusing. I struggled with the pronoun “he” to try to mask the identity of the main character but I know it can get confusing for the reader. And the message was, I admit it, a hard sell and it comes out a little cheesy. Oh well, it is a start.

Aspiring novelist. Frustrated theologian.